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Friday, 29 May 2015
The Adventures Of Marmar The Marshmallow
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Interesting story Amy. We need to work on paragraphing skills. Each time you write about a new idea you need to put it into a new paragraph. Remember as you read your story to edit.
1 comment:
Interesting story Amy. We need to work on paragraphing skills. Each time you write about a new idea you need to put it into a new paragraph. Remember as you read your story to edit.
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